My first pass at page 4 was acceptable as a drawing, but I felt it lacked the drama I want for the sequence. So I’m planning to force the perspective more, to feel the baby’ point-of-view, looking up… and enlarge the moon. Tried some little thumbnails:
But I really get a better idea by messing around with the actual image in photoshop, skewing the buildings and enlarging the moon. Here;s a comparison of the two versions:
The chimneys are kind of messed up now, and the perspective isn’t exactly what it should be, and I think I won’t have the cloud overlapping the chimney like that… but compared side-by-side, I think the new way is better, much more dramatic. So I will re-draw it with that composition!